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2006-05-20 20:45	Kolejna prosba o ocene	haste
Witam Prosil bym bardzo o ocene mojego listu motywacyjnego... With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's "........." for ?????????.. I wish to apply for this job. The position seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interests I have 2 years practical experience in IT sector. I still extend and gain new theoretical knowledge from this range. During my studies I have an opportunity to familiarize myself with many of programming techniques (e.g. C, C++, Java, SQL) algorithmic and optimalizations . I have strong background in modern computers and networking hardware, various peripherals and electronic devices , as well as knowledge of many operating system and office suites . My enclosed CV provides more details on my qualifications I?m very personable, flexible and well organized person with a ?can do? attitude, who likes to see project to completion. Abilities such as analytical thinking, fast learning and accurate conclusions should be very useful for a worker in a company like ????.. My background and career goals seem to match your job requirements well. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing with you Bede wdzieczny za wszelkie uwagi. List byl pisany w oparciu o gotowe juz schematy... skomentuj

2006-05-20 22:18	Re: Kolejna prosba o ocene	KaRoLa
jak dla mnie to kiepskie i pomijam bledy gramatyczne. > With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's "........." for > ……………………….. I wish to apply for this job. nie wczorajsze tylko data konkretna, for the position of: > The position seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and > career interests jak z przedszkola, wywalic w ogole > I have 2 years practical experience in IT sector. I still extend and gain new > theoretical knowledge from this range. During my studies I have an opportunity > to familiarize myself with many of programming techniques (e.g. C, C++, Java, > SQL) algorithmic and optimalizations . powielona informacja z cv > I have strong background in modern computers and networking hardware, various > peripherals and electronic devices , as well as knowledge of many operating > system and office suites . My enclosed CV provides more details on my > qualifications za ogolnie. > I’m very personable, flexible and well organized person with a “can do” > attitude, who likes to see project to completion. > Abilities such as analytical thinking, fast learning and accurate conclusions > should be very useful for a worker in a company like ………….. > My background and career goals seem to match your job requirements > well. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively > Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing with you hehe wlasnie z takich przykladow sie najczesciej wysmiewa. > Bede wdzieczny za wszelkie uwagi. List byl pisany w oparciu o gotowe juz > schematy... to widac co zmienic: podziel CL na konkretne akapity: 1. I would like to apply itd 2. dlaczego wlasnie ta firma (nie dlatego ze jest najlepsza), dlaczego wlasnie ten dzial, jesli stypendia to najlepiej tutaj wspomniec o wiedzy teoretycznej, gdzie sie ja nabylo. Ewentualnie dodatkowe kursy. 3. konkretniej na temat umiejetnosci, ale nie tak ze rzucasz hasla. Od tego jest cv. W CL masz np opisac doswiadczenei zawodowe. I na podstawie tego co zrobiles opisac swoje umiejetnosci. 4. wpokazac ze sie jest swiadomym wyzwan jakie niesie ze soba praca, i nakierowac lekko na zainteresowanie sie czytajacego spotkaniem. Wskazac tez ewentualne daty, ktore moga nie odpowiadac. popatrz sobie tam http://www.bournemouth.ac.uk/careers/CoveringLetters.html Pozdrawiam KK skomentuj

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